So I did a different take of what I did previously. I like this composition better. I had been told before that my illustration style (illo) is too ‘text book’. Constructive criticism is very important to me because without it, I cannot improve my work. So whenever I feel that my illo is not good enough, I will do it over and over again until I like it. In this case, this illo is my fourth. Kept the first one just to remind me of what I did not do better, threw away the other two because I really hate them.